*
jailed in a reused
margarine container;
observed behind
one way glass
it’s time to break free
it’s time to break free
“look out world,
you’re not ready for me yet.”
i baited myself
hook, line and sink her
strung out;
wired on the new herbal craze.
the world only comes
in black, white and gray
when you’re living in a daze
it’s time to break free
it’s time to break free
conversed fate
into the same mind-set,
- even though
being paraplegic
didn’t sound half bad.
and god schlepped home
disappointed;
and empty-handed.
it’s time to break free
it’s time to break free
but instead i drowned
in the bottomless, blue sea.
independence said,
i didn’t make the team.
*
©2006-2009 ~hunnybunny09
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My father used to say, "I trust you, but not your descisions."
He doesn't speak to me anymore.
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I went off on a limb with this one, but I'm actually a little proud of it. I hope you enjoy it. Some hardcore critique would be nice, since I don't know what I was doing really. If it doesn't make sense let me know, kkay? <3 (Think of teenagers and worms.. lol. >.<
He doesn't speak to me anymore.
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I went off on a limb with this one, but I'm actually a little proud of it. I hope you enjoy it. Some hardcore critique would be nice, since I don't know what I was doing really. If it doesn't make sense let me know, kkay? <3 (Think of teenagers and worms.. lol. >.<
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I really appreciate it!
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"Peace is the only battle worth waging." - Albert Camus (1913-1960)
hook, line and sink her"
"independence said,
i didn’t make the team."
Very good, Hope! ^__^ <333
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"Peace is the only battle worth waging." - Albert Camus (1913-1960)
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